Some people believe that the internet will replace traditional books in the future. Do you believe this would be a positive or a negative development.

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,
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has become part of our daily life especially about easier to discover
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. Many people believe that traditional
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will eventually be replaced by the
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in the future. In the following paragraph,
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and negative development of
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issue will be outlined in detail. Nowadays, people
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internet
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book, or
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commonly
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as E-book,
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the
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papers.
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is because reading an e-book makes it simpler to approach our target topic, and
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less time than finding the
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in the library.
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,
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books
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have widely
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not only about what we want but
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our desire topic.
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is due to better development machines for easily life about reading
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on the
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in the future.
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, there are spilt opinions about
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internet
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will replace traditional
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. Some believe that
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the internet
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might leads to harm people's growth.
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, reading
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make us lose one's sight from
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the lights
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of computer or
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electronic
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electronic
machines which contribute to
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our eyes
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.
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, reading
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us less feeling than reading on
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's flip, the smell of new
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from the bookstore, and the sense
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our physical body
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paper
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all can be negative development which
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can't be
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. In conclusion, I personally disagree with
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view point
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because I believe that the growth of electronic
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to replace traditional ones will have detrimental effects in the future.
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