Write a letter to a transport office about a problem with the transportation system in your area. • Describe the situation you are facing • Why do you consider it a problem • What change you would like to recommend.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inform you about the issues we are facing on bus route 205 from Richmond to Vancouver on weekdays. With the new timings which were introduced

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week the busses are commencing at a half an hour time lap from Richmond for which earlier it was a 15 minute time break. Please note that

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has created unprecedented delays for commuters going to their work during rush hours since the bus route passes 3 school zones.

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, the busses are crowded with people creating an uncomfortable drive towards the city We would highly appreciate

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we can go back to the previous time breaks of 15 minutes between busses so that people can have a peaceful drive towards their office daily. Your attention to

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regard is highly appreciated Yours sincerely, Suhitha Karunanayake

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IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

143 words

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Write a letter to a transport office about a problem with the transportation system in your area. • Describe the situation you are facing • Why do you consider it a problem • What change you would like to recommend.

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Nowadays, we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish?

Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work than with their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

othere think secondary school students should study inter Dions both these views and gie your while others belleve that tary school studi valuable school time. Discuss both these side

An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping on line.