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Write a letter to a transport office about a problem with the transportation system in your area. • Describe the situation you are facing • Why do you consider it a problem • What change you would like to recommend.

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you about the issues we are facing on bus route 205 from Richmond to Vancouver on weekdays. With the new timings which were introduced
last
 week the busses are commencing at a half an hour time lap from Richmond for which earlier it was a 15 minute time break. Please note that
this
 has created unprecedented delays for commuters going to their work during rush hours since the bus route passes 3 school zones.
In addition
 to
this
, the busses are crowded with people creating an uncomfortable drive towards the city We would highly appreciate
if
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it if
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 we can go back to the previous time breaks of 15 minutes between busses so that people can have a peaceful drive towards their office daily. Your attention to
this
 regard is highly appreciated Yours sincerely, Suhitha Karunanayake
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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