Write a letter to a transport office about a problem with the transportation system in your area. • Describe the situation you are facing • Why do you consider it a problem • What change you would like to recommend.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to inform you about the issues we are facing on bus route 205 from Richmond to Vancouver on weekdays. With the new timings which were introduced

last

week the busses are commencing at a half an hour time lap from Richmond for which earlier it was a 15 minute time break. Please note that

this

has created unprecedented delays for commuters going to their work during rush hours since the bus route passes 3 school zones.

In addition

this

, the busses are crowded with people creating an uncomfortable drive towards the city We would highly appreciate

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it if

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we can go back to the previous time breaks of 15 minutes between busses so that people can have a peaceful drive towards their office daily. Your attention to

this

regard is highly appreciated Yours sincerely, Suhitha Karunanayake

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

143 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to a transport office about a problem with the transportation system in your area. • Describe the situation you are facing • Why do you consider it a problem • What change you would like to recommend.

Word Count

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