Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly expected that the

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budget ought to be a greater focus on serving the public.

In contrast

,other individuals assume that government should create an investment in the

arts

. I

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that public service is

such

an important role towards

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society

although

spending on the

arts

is not a waste of money. with regards the public services,

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necessarily puts a budget on them for a fundamental reason is quality of life improvement.The

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government

governemnt

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government

should give funds to health centres and doctors in order to improve citizens' health.In case not, the overall health standard would be definitely declined dramatically.

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diseases widely.

Similarly

,education should be properly invested to make children and adults knowledgeable.

Consequently

,it tends to

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and growth in the economy of the country.

Therefore

,it is clear that spending money for providing services to

public

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is significant.

On the other hand

,the

arts

should not be completely neglected for

such

reasons.The artists would not continue their work if they did not get a salary is considered as

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reason.Take ,

for example

, music and theatre performances that may have to close if the artists did not receive income.Due to that cause,

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must encourage them and give them a monthly salary to improve their quality and provide

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entertainment to the people.

Furthermore

, The

arts

provide creativity and promote harmony

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society.

Additionally

,they have a history and culture.

Hence

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the

arts

play role in entertaining society. To sum up,the authorities need to allocate expenditure for the

arts

as well as publicity of services as they provide a super quality of life to the community.