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Scientists that computers will become more intelligent than human Some find it is a positive trend while others think it is a negative development. Discuss points and give your own opinion.

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 opinion. It has been suggested that intelligence in
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 sector improved
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highly
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 now crossed human knowledge. I am going to give some logical
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 computers or robots?
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 vital. If we look around,
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computers
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 uncountable things in our daily life. It is clearly seen
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why it is
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 sector could not run a single day without computers. It is
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computers is very much critical in
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 another by-product of
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 of our life.
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getting lonely seems another outcome of
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 for the world. In sum, it is clearly visible that like everything else in the world it has both pros and cons.
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, in my perspective, since the bright sides are more we must go for it.
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 we have to puck good things rather
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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