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In your opinion in what ways does agriculture contribute to economic grows?

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From the very beginning of creation, people have been struggling with feeding problems. So, humans start to cultivate. Agriculture has been turning into one of the most important industries by the ever-growing population and industrialization. There seem to be a large number of causes to pinpoint that cultivation can affect the economy, but the list of
such
 causes can be narrowed to some limited causes as follows: farmers and consumers. Speaking of the former, playing an important role in the financial system, farmers and owners of the ranch's gross domestic and national products. On the one hand, they contribute to lots of groups and factories
such
 as fertilizer producers, and it can help the economic cycle to have more turnover.
On the other hand
, by exporting a group of commodities like wool, and skins of domestic and cultivated products, farmers can accumulate so much money for themselves and the national budget. Turning to the latter, consumers play an important role too, because they belong to other parts of the economy. by Spending their money and incomes, employee and workers participate in financial turnover and free enterprise. Based on an ever-growing population, demand for products has been increasing and relative affluence completely relies on purchasing power. So, consumers have a great pecuniary effect on society.
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