Governments spend a lot of money on public event including national holidays, public and religious festivals. Some people say that the governments spends too much on this and that should use this money on other major things. Do you agree or disagree?

Opinions are divergent regarding the disproportionate amount of money spent on public events. Some people opine that the government should invest more in other major things

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equipment and environmental campaigns. While I overwhelmingly agree with

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believe that celebrating public

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every year has many advantages. On the one hand, public celebrations might put an insupportable financial burden on the state budget which could certainly lead to imbalanced budget allocation. As a consequence, the governments would become less able to tackle environmental issues effectively or make advancements and innovations in technological machines, which could lead to the destruction of urbanization due to the frequency of extreme weather events and the weakened competitiveness of the national economy because of outdated technological equipment.

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every year generates huge benefits.

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foremost, the annual organizations of national

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give the general public a sense of patriotism, helping in the endeavour to preserve and revitalize the national history from one generation to the

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prime example, a number of Asian countries celebrate their independence day on an annual basis to commemorate the day on which they were literally free from the European colonizers.

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public event is of critical importance in terms of the formation of social connections,

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a community together. In conclusion, the celebration of public events might diminish the effectiveness of government policies in tackling and supporting other major challenges but organizing public

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and festivals is of great importance regarding the preservation of culture and religion.