Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: -suggest someone who deserves the reward -mention what they have done to help the community -say what reward you would like to give this person

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Dear sir/madam, My name is Gobinda Mudvhari one of a member, of the Kathmandu community.I am writing

this

letter to your newspaper office recommend to giving

this

reward to Mr Jhon.

To begin

with,Mr Jhon who lives in the same community gives very valuable time,idea and money for making the park centre of our area.After establishing the park there are many children as well as older people who can play and exercise in the evening and morning.He was the person who rais the voice for making parks for our society,

moreover

,his contribution to

this

work is unforgettable. Your newspaper office always rewarded those people who do something special to help our community.As I thinking of organising a small programme and request send to Mr John for the welcome and give a small warm love symbol as a gift for admiring him,

furthermore

,request him to tell something about you and your future view for local people. yours sincerely, Gobinda Mudvhari

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

157 words

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