Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: -suggest someone who deserves the reward -mention what they have done to help the community -say what reward you would like to give this person

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Dear sir/madam, I was happy to hear that your establishment New Timeline Newspaper is searching for individuals to offer rewards for those who have a huge part in serving the city and individuals. In line with

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, I want to nominate my

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whom I believe deserves

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opportunity and chance to thank her for her good deeds. My

mother

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is very generous in rendering help to her neighbourhood in terms of promoting cleanliness in their area. Of

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, the health hazards in our community became less and ,

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definitely

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our village is one of the most environmental friendly compared to other areas. Another quality of my

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is that

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she is very active in participating in a lot of programs in our area like

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, attending feeding programs, vaccinations for infants and many more. If I was given a chance, I want you to reward my

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with a simple token or a plaque of appreciation.

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, cleaning materials could help a lot in the improvement of our community. I am Hoping you consider my concern. Yours faithfully, Joanna

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

182 words

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