Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: -suggest someone who deserves the reward -mention what they have done to help the community -say what reward you would like to give this person

Dear sir/madam, I was happy to hear that your establishment New Timeline Newspaper is searching for individuals to offer rewards for those who have a huge part in serving the city and individuals. In line with

this

, I want to nominate my

mother

whom I believe deserves

this

opportunity and chance to thank her for her good deeds. My

mother

is very generous in rendering help to her neighbourhood in terms of promoting cleanliness in their area. Of

this

, the health hazards in our community became less and ,

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our village is one of the most environmental friendly compared to other areas. Another quality of my

mother

is that

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she is very active in participating in a lot of programs in our area like

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, attending feeding programs, vaccinations for infants and many more. If I was given a chance, I want you to reward my

mother

with a simple token or a plaque of appreciation.

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, cleaning materials could help a lot in the improvement of our community. I am Hoping you consider my concern. Yours faithfully, Joanna