Write a letter to your neighbor requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: – Your reason for writing – What you would like to happen – A nice, respectful style

Dear Mandy, I am writing to let you know my concern regarding
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your lovely
dog
. I am having a review for two weeks
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because
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because
of my upcoming exam and I need to concentrate
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my studies. Your
dog
is always barking in front of my window whenever
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putting your
dog
outside your
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. For
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cannot tolerate the noise which your
dog
is creating. I would suggest that you need to tie your
dog
just near your house and do not let your
dog
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around the street. It will help me a lot for my concentration in my studies and
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, I think it will lessen the incidence of your
dog
biting the neighbours. I am hoping that you could consider my situation right now. I am not against
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your
dog
but
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at least
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at least
we find ways to keep your
dog
from barking. Hopefully, after my
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we can
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out together with your
dog
. Yours truly, Joanna
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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