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The tradition that family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts on families and societies?

#tradition #meals #impacts #families #societies
There is no doubt that individuals maintain their lives more isolated than before. The dinner rituals for special events with relatives are vanishing due to
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 lifestyle of people.
Therefore
, both families and
societies
 have encountered some detrimental effects. In today's world, lots of juveniles have become more independent ,and start to
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 remotely from their parents. The competitive
worklife
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work life
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 and huge increase in
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job opportunities
at
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 city centres have caused that personalised lifestyles.
Hence
, the kids see their
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 and fathers less than ever,
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especially
espacially
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especially
 for special dinners.
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, according to a recent survey, pupils that are between 18-25 in America, have travelled %15 less to their hometowns than
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 places. Familie reunions take place rarely in today's
comtemporary
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contemporary
societies
, and that situation makes up some detrimental effects on both nuclear and large families, and
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 environment. In my opinion, old and solid family bonds have
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 due to former reasons.
Moreover
,
societies
 feel scared and frustrated. A
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 study showed, young pupils do not reinforce their social relationships, because they feel lonely for their weak family situations. In conclusion, due to recent-hardworking lifestyles, people have become more lonely and independent, and
societies
 and families
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affected
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that
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that
 in negative ways.
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