1.Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views

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1. What does an airline clerk say when he/she wants to
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passengers’s tickets, passports or visas? Key: May I have your ticket / passport / visa, please? 2. What does a passenger say to an airline clerk when he/she want to carry his/her bag on the plane? Key: Can I carry
this
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bag on the plane? 3. What does an airline clerk say when he/she wants to ask a passenger how many bags he/she wants to
check
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in? Key: How many bags do you want to
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in? 4. What does an airport security guard usually say to passengers at an airport security
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? Key: - Please put all of your metal objects in
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tray. - Please take off your coat and place it on the conveyor belt. - Now, step I walk / go through the metal detector. - Sir, remove / take off your belt / shoes, please. - Please stand over here and put your arms out. 5. What does a passenger say when a customs officer wants to know the purpose his/her visit? Key: I’m here to study/to visit my relatives/for sightseeing/for business. 6. What does a customs officer say when he/she wants to know a passenger’s length of visit? Key: How long do you plan on staying? How long do you intend to stay? How long will you be staying? …
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Academic qualifications
  • Specialized skills
  • In-depth knowledge
  • Personal growth
  • Social development
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • Career progression
  • Professional networking
  • Education
  • Work experience
  • Successful career
  • Personal interests
  • Career goals
  • Decision-making process
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