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Some young people like to copy the behavior clothes of famous people. Why might this be the case? What problems might it cause?

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Adolescents nowadays are fond of imitating the design of attire with abundant personalities. In
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 I will be tackling the reasons why most teenage groups are behaving like
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To begin
 with, there are a lot of advertisements seen
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young
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 in different parts of the globe. These television shows in which popular persons are wearing specific attire that individual tends to idolize on how to carry their fabrics in a right or lovely manner. I think that most middle age
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 to compete with their same age by imitating the clothes of the famous person to
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 feel that they belong to society and their circle of friends.
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 that they should follow the trends in their community.
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, the parents would be the ones that will affect
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 issue due to the increasing demand for money in able for them to provide for their children to purchase wardrobe which
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 a lot. It
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 if they can buy what they want and cannot sway for the new design of clothes.
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, they might insult one another for not purchasing what is out in the market. To sum up, the idea of imitating the design clothes of a famous person might affect the individual's behaviour and the economic stability of the families.
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