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It is important to use English language for the development of tourism.Some people thinks that this will lead to English spoken globally. Discuss its advantages and disadvantages.

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In order to develop the tourism industry,
English
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 plays a fundamental role. Many
people
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 are convinced that due to
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,
English
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 will become the global
language
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.
This
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disadvantages
disadavantages
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disadvantages
 of the possibility of
English
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to become
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 the most spoken argot in the world and provide a logical conclusion. The two main advantages of using
English
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 as
universal
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a universal
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language
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 are bigger opportunities for
people
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 all around the world to understand each other and the
develop
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 of
children
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 culture and
brain
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.
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, if there is a
language
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 spoken globally,
people
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 from different countries who speak different tongues can communicate easily, because that
language
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 is supposed to be
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known
knwon
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known
among
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 a wide number of
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people
peole
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people
.
This
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 way, there is a big opportunity for strangers to build new networks in a new country.
Secondly
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, as
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 international vocabulary,
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 is studied in each school
of
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in
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 the world. Due to
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, children know a
second
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language
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 apart
of
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 their original. Is very important giving to the children the opportunity to learn a new vocabulary in order to get a very active brain.
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, they can get new information on the Internet in
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 and they can develop a very critical way of thinking.
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,
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English
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of English
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a global
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language
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also
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 has some major disadvantages like the loss of identity and tradition for countries and the disappearance of traditional and ancient tongues. If
people
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 start to learn
English
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, they probably
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 will discover and
adapt
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adopt
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 an international manner of dressing or cooking. Today,
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 phenomenon is
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known
knonw
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known
 as "globalisation" and it
lead
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 to
create
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 a global culture to the detriment of local traditions. What's more, new generations will learn
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 as a new
language
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, but on the other
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 they will lose traditional dialects, which are spoken only among old
people
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. As
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apply
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proof of
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, nowadays, in
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 a lot of dialects and ancient vocabulary are been lost due to new argot like
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. To conclude,
although
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 having
English
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 spoken globally has certain disadvantages like loss of
tradions
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traditions
 and the disappearance of dialects, it has an
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extremely
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extremely
 positive impact on the tourism industry and the job market. I believe that
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 benefits of
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 outweigh its disadvantages.
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