Some think that residents should responsible for keeping their areas clean and tidy, while others say it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

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There are few
people
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who argue that citizens are responsible to keep their
neighborhoods
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neat and clean. While some of them believe that it is only the responsibility of the
government
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. Making the
environment
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clean is the equal responsibility of both the parties i.e. the residents of the
area
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as well as the
government
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. I
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agree with the foremost statement that being the inhabitant of any residential
area
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, keeping the
area
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should be the priority.
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, the
government
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should play their roles to maintain the cleanliness of all the areas of the country. In many Household areas, there could be some small-scale problems rises on a daily basis that can be easily addressed by the local
people
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to maintain the hygiene of the
area
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.
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, standing rainwater on roads, or blocked drains can be cleaned by the municipality of the neighbouring
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. In South California,
people
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of small villages and residential buildings, arrange
a monthly meetings
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to address
people
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's issues to establish good atmospheric conditions for the locals.
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, the role of
government
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is equally significant for a clean
environment
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. There are various issues that can only be resolved by higher
government
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officials
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reconstruction of roads or the repairing of gas or waterlines within the localities. These sorts of issues will create a great impact on
householder's
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physical and mental health as well as on the atmospheric conditions, to keep the
area
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fit for humans, spontaneous actions are needed by the
government
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. It is reported in the Times newspaper that the US launched a local resident portal for different areas of the state that badly needs
government
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attention for maintaining a clean and hygienic
environment
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. To sum up, I agree with both the statements that both
government
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and tenants should take a charge
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a
cleared
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and neat
environment
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.
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