Some people feel that manufactures and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of foods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The amount of packaging of foods is a topic that has been getting increasing attention over the past few years. While most agree that something has to be done in order to reduce the

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of packages used, the best way to achieve

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is still controversial. On one hand, some people think that the manufacturers and supermarkets should decrease the packaging of the goods they sell, but

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, some are convinced that the initiative has to come from the customers, who should avoid buying

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products. The idea that a top-down approach should be adopted, with the highly packaged

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not being able to reach the supermarket shelves in the

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place has a lot of

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would remove these goods from commercialization and in

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be a surefire way of diminishing packaging usage.

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, the implementation of

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strategy is not so straightforward and would demand an articulation from the government to approve laws that forced the companies to reduce the amount of food packaging. Meanwhile, a change in consumer culture doesn't require any

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by part of the politicians and if the customers stop purchasing

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with a lot of packaging, there'll be a natural pressure for the stores to stop selling

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products and, as a consequence, the manufacturers would have no incentive to keep producing them.

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package usage headed by the supermarkets and producers would lead to a faster outcome, in practice it would be really hard to implement

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the packaging problem from a consumer point of view would be a more realistic approach to solve it.