The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money. This money would be better spent on providing new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

• In our modern life, the reinstatement of older In our modern life, the reinstatement of older structures in

greatest

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towns all around the world costs

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amount of

money

.

This

money

would be superior spent on providing new apartments and street evolution.

In

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this

essay agrees that

,

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the

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majority of countries the government spent the greatest amount of

money

to develop

a roads

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roads

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or providing new housing

instead

of fixing ancient

buildings

.

First

of all, the burning

ancient

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of ancient

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buildings

should not be allowed

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public

money

to develop, and

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it is better to build new

buildings

than to repair old ones. • On the one hand, if the government do not allocate

money

to fixing

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long ago construction, the

country

is in

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crisis. Because tourists contribute to the main wealth of the

country

,

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many visitors like to see the ancient edifice. Because the

buildings

are ancient monuments that reveal the history of that

country

.

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, all the main tourist places in our

country

are places with ancient

buildings

and monuments. Every

country

is famous for

such

buildings

, if there are no

such

buildings

, no one would be interested in

this

country

. • On

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th

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the

other hand

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, if the

country

uses public

money

only for new houses and road repairs, it will play a major role in the beautiful appearance of the

country

, and through

this

, the

country

creates conditions for people and makes the appearance of the

country

charming.

For example

, due to the lack of ancient

buildings

in our

country

, the state does not allocate a lot of

money

for their repair, and

this

money

is mainly spent on building new

buildings

. It creates new conditions for everyone. • In conclusion, having weighed everything mentioned

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and I can come to

a

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conclusion that it is good that the

country

spends a large amount of

money

mainly on the renovation of ancient

buildings

. Because these

buildings

are a reminder to people since ancient times.