The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money. This money would be better spent on providing new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
• In our modern life, the reinstatement of older In our modern life, the reinstatement of older structures in
greatest
towns all around the world costs Correct article usage
the greatest
gigantic
amount of Correct article usage
a gigantic
money
. Use synonyms
This
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money
would be superior spent on providing new apartments and street evolution. Use synonyms
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the
majority of countries the government spent the greatest amount of Change preposition
in the
money
to develop Use synonyms
a roads
or providing new housing Correct the article-noun agreement
roads
a road
instead
of fixing ancient Linking Words
buildings
. Use synonyms
First
of all, the burning Linking Words
ancient
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of ancient
buildings
should not be allowed Use synonyms
spent
public Change the verb form
to spend
money
to develop, and Use synonyms
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secondly
it is better to build new Add a comma
,secondly
buildings
than to repair old ones.
• On the one hand, if the government do not allocate Use synonyms
money
to fixing Use synonyms
of
long ago construction, the Change preposition
apply
country
is in Use synonyms
economic
crisis. Because tourists contribute to the main wealth of the Correct article usage
an economic
country
, Use synonyms
and
many visitors like to see the ancient edifice. Because the Correct word choice
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buildings
are ancient monuments that reveal the history of that Use synonyms
country
. Use synonyms
For example
, all the main tourist places in our Linking Words
country
are places with ancient Use synonyms
buildings
and monuments. Every Use synonyms
country
is famous for Use synonyms
such
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buildings
, if there are no Use synonyms
such
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buildings
, no one would be interested in Use synonyms
this
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country
.
• On Use synonyms
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the
th
Correct your spelling
the
other hand
, if the Change the wording
another hand
other hands
country
uses public Use synonyms
money
only for new houses and road repairs, it will play a major role in the beautiful appearance of the Use synonyms
country
, and through Use synonyms
this
, the Linking Words
country
creates conditions for people and makes the appearance of the Use synonyms
country
charming. Use synonyms
For example
, due to the lack of ancient Linking Words
buildings
in our Use synonyms
country
, the state does not allocate a lot of Use synonyms
money
for their repair, and Use synonyms
this
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money
is mainly spent on building new Use synonyms
buildings
. It creates new conditions for everyone.
• In conclusion, having weighed everything mentioned Use synonyms
up
and I can come to Change preposition
apply
a
conclusion that it is good that the Correct article usage
the
country
spends a large amount of Use synonyms
money
mainly on the renovation of ancient Use synonyms
buildings
. Because these Use synonyms
buildings
are a reminder to people since ancient times.Use synonyms
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