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All parents want the best opportunity for their children. There some people who think that schools should teach the children skills but others think that having a range of subjects is better for a child’s future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#parents #opportunity #children #people #schools #skills #range #subjects #child’s #future
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lately
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parent
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 want to be the ideal opportunity for their kids. according to some
people
 who think that
schools
 should
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teach
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tech
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teach
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them
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 different skills but some
people
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kids in their practical
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this
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side and
also
 give your opinion as well . on the one hand, some believe that
schools
 teacher should give preference to the skills because always fruitful for them in their
future
 and
also
 if you learn some
skill
 in your childhood
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you'll be
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expected
exported
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for instance
, in
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 should more value
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the
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skill
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subjects
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 and
language
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.
furthermore
.
people
 think that
schools
 should give more value to
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skill
 level because once they learn one of the
skill
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skills
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 so they never sleep hungry.
on the other hand
,
vast
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 majority
people
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of people
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 think that
quality
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 of
subject
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 will be more
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 for their
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children
children's
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children
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 in
future
.
i
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 would like to highlight some major
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such
 as math and physics
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more
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benefit
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in
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life's
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 .to illustrate, most of the
schools
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range
 of
subject
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subjects
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 like
advances
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english
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English
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it
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will be helpful in high education.
in addition
,
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 of
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are
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 important to learn due
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 modern era because in
future
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all
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 about
the
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technology so you'll get
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 about that by
learn
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learning
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 different subjects.
for example
, many school
system
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systems
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 are giving
aware
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about
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the
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web designers and conducting a class on that every week . to sum up,
people
 believed that
skill
 more important than
range
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a range
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 of
subject
 but other thinks that
range
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 of
subject
 will be fruitful for them in their kids
future's
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futures
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. in my opinion,
skill
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 important than
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a variety
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 of
subject
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subjects
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 because skills
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always
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always
 be in your hands.
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