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Every day traffic seems to get worse on our roads. how can we reduce the number of cars on our roads today? what alternatives can we offer car drivers

In
this
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 metropolitan era, the issue of
traffic
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 congestion has become a popular bone of contention.
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cars
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 can bring a huge amount of convenience to human life,
this
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 act is responsible to make
traffic
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 on roads.In
this
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 essay,I will discuss by implementing public transportation by the government can reduce
traffic
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 and alternatively, they can
also
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 offer
jobs
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 to car
drivers
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.
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 with, public transit is the most suitable measure that can prevent the number of
cars
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 on the roads.
Instead
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 of using
cars
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 by one or two
people
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, buses can have the capacity to carry hundreds of passengers at a time.
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, In India, 67% of
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 congestion has been reduced as the administration has implemented public transport for the citizens.
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 is not only a comfortable source to travel but cheap as well.
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, thousands of folks are inclined towards
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 system.
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, some car
drivers
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 can be unhappy as their
jobs
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 can be snatched. But
this
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 can be rectified if authorities can open vacancies, like bus
drivers
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, bus cashiers and so on.
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, In Japan, many
people
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 are happy to have a new system
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 providing them with new
jobs
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. As a consequence, 56% of the unemployment rate has been reduced, which happened because of shortening the usage of
cars
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, as their government has offered employment facilities to the general public. In conclusion, more
cars
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 on roads can be declined if
people
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 use public shipping
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 of
cars
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 and the government should offer
jobs
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 to car
drivers
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. So
this
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 can be only possible if
people
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 make the
first
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 step because without public help nothing can be done.

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