Many companies offer their employees the opportunity to work from home. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home for the company. And give your own opinion.

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from
home
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kind of working model in
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. Since
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pandemic
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the pandenmic
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pandenmic
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pandemic
has hit globally. Many corporates are adopting
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home
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the home
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model for
there
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their
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employees .
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from
home
is now considered as
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the new
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normal
of
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office goers
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worldwide. It has
catch
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attention
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the attention
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of Many companies worldwide to think about offering
work
from
home
.
Work
from
home
or remote jobs were unheard of before
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pandemic
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pandenmic
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pandemic
has
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hit globally . It was
like
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unheard
or
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impossible to imagine that some percentage of
workforce
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the workforce
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will
work
from their homes and
finishing
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project
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the project
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deadline . Because of
this
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,this
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more and more enterprises are
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initiating
intiating
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initiating
work
from
home
culture.
Specifically
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in urban areas technology , teaching ,
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administrative
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and admistrative
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admistrative
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administrative
jobs are now performed from
homes
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the homes
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of employees worldwide. The biggest
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factor
factior
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factor
for promoting
work
from
home
is
operation
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the operation
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cost of running and
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maintaining
mainataining
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maintaining
office
building
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buildings
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. Companies are now saving on
power
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the power
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bill
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bills
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,
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maintenance
mainatence
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and mainatence
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expenditure
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expenditures
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.
work
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from
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form
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from
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home
is going to transform how we will
work
in
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twenty-first
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twenty
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first
century .
However
, there are some downside points of
work
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working
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from
home
.
Certain
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business
function
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functions
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can not be performed by adopting
work
from
home
. Sales and marketing , corporate
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communication
communications
comminication
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communication
,
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corporate
corpoarte
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corporate
trainings
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training
pieces of training
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of employees etc can not be completed from
home
. As these functions require human
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interaction
internation
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international
and going out in
market
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the market
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is
necessity
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a necessity
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. Just imagine
sales
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the sales
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team to promote
new
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a new
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product in
market
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the market
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has to talk to
potential
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a potential
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customer
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customers
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by interacting
them
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with them
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only .
Furthermore
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employee productivity is
also
key
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a key
the key
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point of
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discussion
disccusion
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discussion
before considering
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employee
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an ememployee
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ememployee
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employee
request
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requests
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for
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to
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work
from
home
.
Specialy
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Speciality
Specially
Especially
in
tech
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the tech
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sector
work
from
home
requires employee productivity and quality . To conclude
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apply
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this
,
work
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working
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from
home
is
new
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the new
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normal for corporates. Despite
of
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apply
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its
shortcomings
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,shortcomings
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it has
own
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its own
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advantages . It
Provide
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new
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opportunities
oppurnities
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opportunities
for
corpoartes
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corporates
to explore ways of performing various business functions .
For
example
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,example
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now days hiring in
tech
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the tech
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sector happen online through zoom or
microsoft
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meeting.So
work
from
home
is going to stay and will be adopted by more corporates in
coming
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the coming
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future.
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