1. You and your brother have decided to go for a holiday but due to some reason, your brother is not able to join you for holiday. Write a letter to your friend to invite him/her for holiday. Give detail plan of vacation. State reason why your brother will not come with you. Invite your friend.

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letter to invite you to join a vacation with me in Bangkok Thailand. The reason why I have to invite you

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my brother is unable to attend

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trip with me. My brother and I booked a flight ticket and accommodation for our short holiday.

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4 nights trip in Bangkok.Our trips will be on 25 November to 1st of December. The flight time will be at 3pm from Melbourne Airport to Bangkok Airport. I was shocked and disappointed that received a message from my brother. He informed me that he has a very important business meeting in Hong Kong needs to attend,and

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his boss would like him to stay in Hong Kong for another 2 days. Since 2019, we are unable to meet each other due to our busy working lifestyle. Today, I would like to invite you to come on

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vacation with me, so that we can have a good time catching up together. Looking forward to hearing back shortly. Kind Regards, Yumi

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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8 paragraphs

180 words

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1. You and your brother have decided to go for a holiday but due to some reason, your brother is not able to join you for holiday. Write a letter to your friend to invite him/her for holiday. Give detail plan of vacation. State reason why your brother will not come with you. Invite your friend.

Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in their hometown. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

For many people, the reason they work hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example, working for charity, improving the neighborhood, or teaching sports to the younger). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The Superiority of Formal Education Over Life Education

Some people believe that the rapid increase in population these days is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. Others believe that the world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world’s economy and society.