Some people prefer to use energy-saving modes of transportation like hybrid cars and bicycles. Others prefer the usual mode of transportation like buses and trains because it is fast and efficient. Which mode of transportation do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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means to travel from one place to another. Some are keen on using traditional methods of

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as buses and trains while others prefer to

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modern means of

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which are innovative. I strongly support the latter approach which

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efficient. Buses and trains are the most reachable means

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available for man in cities.

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number of these vehicles, pollution across the city is leading to its maximum limit.

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, these modes of commute have

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drawback of not dropping the passenger

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their exact location.

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, choosing these kinds of

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means is reducing day by day.

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with, it is well known that technology has revolutionized the world. The world has seen tremendous achievements in all sectors. Out of all the sectors, there has been a drastic enhancement in the

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sector.

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, the invention of hybrid and electric cars which was once thought of as impossible

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has now been made pragmatic. These cars

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electricity to recharge themselves rather than fuels used by orthodox vehicles.

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, it helps in saving

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. The usage of modern technology to deal with day-to-day hindrances has become a norm now.

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hybrid cars or even bicycles the usage of fuels is drastically reduced, thereby, air pollution is reduced.

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energy saving

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should be encouraged

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have proven to advantageous than the means which are already

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. These modern and

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means

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aid us by reducing pollution, saving expenses and

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saving the environment.