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There are different types of music in the world today. Why do we need Music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays

#music #world #country
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are
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 various
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 of sounds over the globe. The world is becoming a small village due to the area of globalization.
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music
have
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 more
importance
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days tunes due to its
importance
 of connecting the youth with their roots. In
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Firstly
, there is
study
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 which shows that listening to
the
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music
 increases
the
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persons
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 IQ level by 9 points by improving
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spatial reasoning.
Also
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 the people who do some creative or
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brainstorming
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brain storming
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 jobs e.g mathematics, Marketing research, medicines etc
music
 can be of great help for
such
 gems.
Moreover
now days
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dancing as a treatment
of
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 heart
diseases
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, anxiety, depression, feeling of loneliness and obesity,
furthermore
a
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research showed that 40 minutes
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zumba
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 is as effective as doing two hours of
high intensity
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 exercises and its popularity is drastically growing among the women all over the world. Some schools are
also
 teaching
music
 as
a
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 extra subject
now a days
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 because of its
importance
 in enhancing the
kids
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 intellectual level and language improvement. Conventional
music
 or the
music
 of
the
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 particular area
have
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it
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 significant
importance
 in connecting the people with their local
artist
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,
understanding
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and understanding
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of
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culture, history and language. In conclusion, I would say
music
 is the food for the soul and is an essential part of today’s life to feel stress-free and to cure minor mental illnesses. Even though youngsters listen to international songs too, traditional
music
 is more essential.
Hence
, it cannot be overlooked.
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  • emotional release
  • cultural significance
  • globalization
  • cultural exchange
  • technology
  • preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • social cohesion
  • expression
  • consumption
  • production
  • traditional music
  • international music
  • diversity
  • identity
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