All natural resources are limited. It is therefore important that all companies make products that can be used for many years. To what extent do YOU agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no question that the indispensable role of mineral

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, businesses should manufacture durable energy for their usage in the near future. From my perspective, I could not

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the paragraphs below. On the one hand, benefits

as well as the number of products sold out the market

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almost enterprises.

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, if they do not know how to manufacture goods, businesses are not capable of selling goods

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electronic gadgets encompassing computers or

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.

Furthermore

, with the availability of state-of-the-art technologies in each company to produce these goods;

as a result

, dependence on natural

resources

could be mitigated and the environment could be saved in the near future.

Additionally

, the overexploitation of natural

resources

can be reckoned with in some ways.

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authorities by encouraging organizations to use renewable energy as well as recyclable material for manufacturing in order to minimize the far-reaching consequences of the loss of natural

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the cooperation of local councils

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widely to citizens how to recycle and reuse products

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the curb of using durable

resources

. By and large, I would opine that the value of curbing the usage of durable

resources

as well as the

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of

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authorities

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to enterprises should use their available cutting-edge technology to manufacture renewable energy as well as eco-friendly material so as to save the environment and

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prosperity of the economy.