Letter number 110 Write a complaint letter to a moving company, let them know that they have damaged some of your furniture, tell them you’re not happy about the service and suggest a solution.

Dear Sir, I am writing to convey my dissatisfaction with the goods shifting
services
provided by Om Logistics.
Firstly
, I would like to inform you that many items which are shifted are damaged and not in a usable condition
such
as my sofas and dining table.
Moreover
, the glass door of our cupboard has
also
broken into two pieces.
Secondly
, your company does not provide insurance
services
and unfortunately, I do not have any insurance for all these items.
Such
services
from a very renowned company are not expected.
Therefore
, I would like to recommend that all the packages need to be packed properly so that they can sustain unpredicted movement during transportation,
in addition
, it is suggested to keep an experienced team for the loading and unloading of the luggage. I hope you will consider my recommendations so that future customers should get satisfactory
services
. Yours faithfully, Manoj Pandya
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • therefore
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  • although
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  • despite

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