You were unhappy about a meal in a restaurant. write a letter to the manager, tell him why you chose his restaurant, explain why you were not happy about the service and tell him what to do.

Dear sir/ madam, I am writing a letter to inform you that I was disappointed with the menu they served during my visit to your establishment. I was expecting nice and tasty food
hence
, it was a mistake. A lot of my friends and family members were endorsing your restaurant for having delicious meals.
Furthermore
, I
also
checked online for the reviews given by those who experienced already having their meals at your restaurant. For
this
reason, I decided to have a look and try how good your service is. As I am waiting for the main dish, it took me almost one hour to be served.
Although
the timing is quite long
but
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I said it is fine but, to my surprise I was upset with the taste of the meal because it is very salty and really unpleasant to my tastebud. Aside from that, they serve me a drink full of ice,so it becomes tasteless. I hope that you personally checked how is your staff doing and
also
checked if the quality of meals being served can satisfy your customers. Yours sincerely, Joanna
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