Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.Why is this the case?Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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transformation.Nowadays nearly everything is managed by smartphones.It is the reason
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of time on their phones every day.
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generation
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the same.In my view it has benefits,but drawbacks as well. The
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over usage
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of smart devices by youngsters is the social benefit they provide.They can connect with
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which opens
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from creating
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new friends to connecting with them on social media.The other reason is
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mobile gaming,especially multiplayer games.They play games for an entertainment
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and spend hours on them even forget about the timing and don’t do other work.
On the other hand
,it has benefits.Youngsters
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good communication skills,
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gives them
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environment.They can communicate with the huge coverage of distances from other countries.I can say it improves knowledge of languages too.For an instance,my cousin learned English
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game
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for months.There are we major of applications
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programs that
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language skills or
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applications for children. In conclusion,I want to say that
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the over-usage of smart devices is very harmful either for
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or physically development of youngsters,they can help them in learning some life-long skills.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • smartphones
  • usage
  • technology
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • entertainment
  • gaming
  • social media
  • communication
  • educational resources
  • addiction
  • dependence
  • negative effects
  • physical health
  • mental health
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