You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the food eaten at a restaurant
last
Sunday. The bill copy is attached. Unfortunately, It was a really pathetic experience. I ordered vegetarian food items,
for example
, Vegetarian biryani, curry and Arabic green Salad with fresh orange juice. To my wonder, the meal taste was extremely bad. It was too spicy and there was a strong smell of lower-quality cooking oil. On top of
this
, the Arabic salad was not as reflected ingredients on the menu.
Although
I ordered fresh orange juice, I was served an artificial-flavoured one. I was not expecting these types of foods from
such
a reputated restaurant.
Therefore
, I inform you to return my money back for
such
a ridiculous eating experience. If I did not hear from you in the
next
two days, I may publish my story in the local newspaper. I am looking forward to your prompt response and necessary action. Yours faithfully, Mark Boon
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