Some people think that it is important to be physically strong to be successful in sport, however others think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about the significance of physical or mental
strength
in Use synonyms
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sport
. It is thought that in order to succeed in Fix the agreement mistake
sports
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the sport
a sport
sport
we have to maintain physical Fix the agreement mistake
sports
strength
, while others believe that mental Use synonyms
health
is more essential. I believe that a combination and maintenance of Use synonyms
these two
Change the determiner
this two health
health
is the best option to succeed in Use synonyms
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sport
sphere.
On the one hand, I agree that physical Correct article usage
the sport
health
plays a major role for those who are involved in Use synonyms
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sport
sphere. Correct article usage
the sport
Usually
all Add a comma
,Usually
kind
of competitions Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
require
a lot Change the verb form
requires
effort
and physical investment for successful performance and results. Change preposition
of effort
For instance
, I used to do Linking Words
sport
for 8 years before I gave up. I can still recall the moments Use synonyms
where
I devoted plenty of time Correct word choice
when
for
gaining physical Change preposition
to
strength
. Use synonyms
As a
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result
a large Add a comma
,result
quantity
of performances Change the quantifier
number
were
accomplished successfully, Change the verb form
was
thus
I believe that Linking Words
an
attention Remove the article
apply
for
physical Change preposition
to
strength
should be paid.
Mental Use synonyms
health
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support
us while dealing with challenges, pressures and stresses that may face every human, not only Change the verb form
supports
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sport
people. Our mental Change the noun form
sports
strength
can reduce the fear of failure when we work toward goals and stay in stable emotional resilience. Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
Gennadie
Golovkin is the most successful man in boxing who has won 42 Correct your spelling
Gennady
performance
with Fix the agreement mistake
performances
Correct your spelling
knockouts
knock outs
. In his Correct your spelling
knockouts
last
Linking Words
interview
he said that people had to have Add a comma
,interview
an
ability to not give a free rein to emotions and feelings which can lead a person off the right path. Mental Correct article usage
the
strength
is able to give us Use synonyms
a
confidence not to give up.
To sum up, I strongly believe that both Correct article usage
the
type
of Change to a plural noun
types
health
should be evaluated and appreciated equally.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite