Write an email to the owner of the nighclub, your email should do the following things. Give information about where you live Describe the problem and say how it effects on you Say how you think the owner could resolve the issue

Dear Owner, I live at 335 Rathburn Road West, Mississauga. My home is just across the street from the nightclub operated by your company at 334 Rathburn road. I am writing to complain about the noise from the nightclub. Since

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month, people have been visiting the club from approximately 7 PM to late at night. Especially on the weekends, the crowd has been increasing. While people are entering and leaving, they shout and talk with

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is always big impact on my life. For one thing, the noise disturbs my sleep and sometimes I am scared of the loud screaming. Another thing is I work in multiple time zones, but the noise makes it difficult for me to concentrate on my work. I would like you to reduce the club timings to three hours earlier than the regular schedule on weekdays.

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would not be perfect for me, as I would still find it hard to spend time at home at weekends, but it would certainly improve the situation. I am sure that other people living on my street would feel happier by

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change. Thank you Regards, Tulasi

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Oct 11, 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

192 words

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Write an email to the owner of the nighclub, your email should do the following things. Give information about where you live Describe the problem and say how it effects on you Say how you think the owner could resolve the issue

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that illegal internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that they have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both views and give own opinion.

Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant area of cities and towns .while other believe housing facilities should be built instead. Do agree or disagree?

many high level of positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than fifty percent female. compnies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impacts of aging population