Write an email to the owner of the nighclub, your email should do the following things. Give information about where you live Describe the problem and say how it effects on you Say how you think the owner could resolve the issue

Dear Owner, I live at 335 Rathburn Road West, Mississauga. My home is just across the street from the nightclub operated by your company at 334 Rathburn road. I am writing to complain about the noise from the nightclub. Since
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month, people have been visiting the club from approximately 7 PM to late at night. Especially on the weekends, the crowd has been increasing. While people are entering and leaving, they shout and talk with
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is always big impact on my life. For one thing, the noise disturbs my sleep and sometimes I am scared of the loud screaming. Another thing is I work in multiple time zones, but the noise makes it difficult for me to concentrate on my work. I would like you to reduce the club timings to three hours earlier than the regular schedule on weekdays.
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would not be perfect for me, as I would still find it hard to spend time at home at weekends, but it would certainly improve the situation. I am sure that other people living on my street would feel happier by
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change. Thank you Regards, Tulasi

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