Some people think should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artist should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
People
often think that creative artists
like painters and musicians get paid well like others. Many Creative artists
are not getting paid well like
movie actors and other creative fields. Nowadays Change preposition
as
people
in creative fields are decreasing due to less pay.
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People
Like Painters and Musicians are treated as same as other artists
because they play a vital role
in the projecting culture of a nation. For example
In India from the
older times to Correct article usage
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present
those two skills plays a vital Correct article usage
the present
role
in the development of the country.
Creative artists
should be funded by Government because they play a key role
in the country's culture. Some people
make their main source of income as Creative artists
.A vast increase in technology nowadays leads to a decrease in these skills at present days people
are using Mobile Phones to create music and paint but some people
are bound to traditional ways of artistic means. Government should provide funds for Correct your spelling
Artists
Artsits
to maintain their life. in some Correct your spelling
artists
of
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,
Countries governments have made some Welfare Schemes for Creative Remove the comma
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artists
. Therefore
every Artist should be paid well to maintain the balance in the society
Creative Artists
also
get funded by Alternate Correct your spelling
Resources
Resourses
like Correct your spelling
Resources
in
Television,movies etc. Many Change preposition
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people
are Correct your spelling
interested
intrested
in Correct your spelling
interested
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arts
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for
the
very large amount of money but actually the Correct article usage
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artists
are not getting as much amount shown in
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on
the
television. Only famous Correct article usage
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people
Arts
are getting paid enough. Change preposition
in Arts
People
which are non-famous and Poor also
have hight
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high
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talent
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talent
instead
of giving attention to the
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people
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and encourage them,
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also
gets
publicity and enough money.
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Conclusion
Either the Government or Private organizations has to give an important Add a comma
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role
in the development of Creative
list. Some Plans have to be implemented for the well-being of Correct article usage
a Creative
Artists
and Private organizations also
have to encourage the
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talent
by any means. More talented people
are there in the world with so many skills, due
to Correct word choice
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lack
of Encouragement so many Correct article usage
a lack
people
are either giving up their talent
or working for low wages. Every individual has to encourage the talent
but not to
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