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Many cities have serious problems with traffic congestion. What are the causes of these problems and what are some possible solutions

#cities #traffic #congestion
In the contemporary world, road
traffic
 congestion is
a
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one of the most prominent
issue
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issues
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 that
people
 faced and it negatively
affect
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to
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individuals day to day life.
This
 essay will suggest that the biggest problem caused by
this
 phenomenon are that
overpopulation
 and Limited road amenities and
then
 argue that private
automobiles
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 reduction and public
transportation
 enhancement are the most viable solution. To commence with, the main reason
of
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 road
traffic
 is
that
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 increasing level of population, because
overpopulation
 leads to limited resources that way
people
unable
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 to utilize public
transportation
because
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ofbecause
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 lack of the public
transportation
 . Whereby individuals tend
purchase
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automobiles
their
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 own utilization because of
busy
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their busy
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 schedule
people
 needed their own vehicles.
However
, these things lead to
traffic
 congestion. Especially it would affect an individual's economy because
of
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late time leads to financial loss.
For instance
, according to a newspaper, in China that citizens probably face excessive
traffic
 congestion problems because of
overpopulation
.
Possible
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 solution to these problems
are
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 that the
authority
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 must drop the
amount
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number
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 of vehicles enter on cities implement bicycle usage for
short distance
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short-distance
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 travelling and implement quality of the public
transportation
 system, if
automobiles
 controlled to enter
a cities
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then
 the negative aspect will
be disappear
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, that way, it would save valuable time.
Furthermore
, increasing the number of public
transportation
 could decrease private
automobiles
 enter on cities.
People
 could satisfy with public
service
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 like buses and
subway
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the subway
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. In
Netherlands
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,
that
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the government have been prohibited
automobiles
instead
 of vehicles. Whereby, could reduce adverse consequences. In conclusion, In conclusion, after a thorough analysis of the topic,
overpopulation
 leads to
the
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traffic
 problems.
However
, we can decrease adverse
situation
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applying the right method to these drawbacks
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