Many cities have serious problems with traffic congestion. What are the causes of these problems and what are some possible solutions

In the contemporary world, road
traffic
congestion is
a
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one of the most prominent
issue
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that
people
faced and it negatively
affect
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to
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individuals day to day life.
This
essay will suggest that the biggest problem caused by
this
phenomenon are that
overpopulation
and Limited road amenities and
then
argue that private
automobiles
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reduction and public
transportation
enhancement are the most viable solution. To commence with, the main reason
of
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road
traffic
is
that
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increasing level of population, because
overpopulation
leads to limited resources that way
people
unable
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to utilize public
transportation
because
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lack of the public
transportation
. Whereby individuals tend
purchase
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automobiles
their
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own utilization because of
busy
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schedule
people
needed their own vehicles.
However
, these things lead to
traffic
congestion. Especially it would affect an individual's economy because
of
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late time leads to financial loss.
For instance
, according to a newspaper, in China that citizens probably face excessive
traffic
congestion problems because of
overpopulation
.
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solution to these problems
are
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that the
authority
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must drop the
amount
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of vehicles enter on cities implement bicycle usage for
short distance
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travelling and implement quality of the public
transportation
system, if
automobiles
controlled to enter
a cities
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then
the negative aspect will
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, that way, it would save valuable time.
Furthermore
, increasing the number of public
transportation
could decrease private
automobiles
enter on cities.
People
could satisfy with public
service
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like buses and
subway
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. In
Netherlands
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,
that
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the government have been prohibited
automobiles
instead
of vehicles. Whereby, could reduce adverse consequences. In conclusion, In conclusion, after a thorough analysis of the topic,
overpopulation
leads to
the
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traffic
problems.
However
, we can decrease adverse
situation
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applying the right method to these drawbacks
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