In many countries, the government likes to spend more money on the arts. Some people agree with this. However, others think government should spend more on health and education. Discuss both sides and giver your opinion.

The Governments in most countries are promoting and spending a lot of expenditure on

Arts

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the Arts

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rather than on health and

education

,

This

has diversified opinions among some individuals.

This

essay discusses both sides. Elevating and funding

Art

in the country can be helpful in creating various jobs and merchants. It attracts the international market which can directly boost

up

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the economy of the nation.For ,example encouraging someone who's interested in painting or building sculptures and preserving the

art

in the museum might attract tourists and

also

promotes our culture.

In addition

, people might choose

this

as a profession and create

theirs

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own jobs.

Further

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it decreases

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unemployment

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the unemployement

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unemployement

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unemployment

rate in the country.

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constructing

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,constructing

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institutions and

acedamies

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academies

academics

for

art

will help the children to build some

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extracurricular

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extra curricular

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extracurricular

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activities which might help them in the future.

However

, in my view, the foremost important thing is to aid people with good

education

and health. Providing proper funds for the construction of hospitals in small towns might save a lot of lives. A survey says that almost 70

percent

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of villages in the world are not having primary clinics near them. On the other

education

in some countries is been least cared for, most of the communities in many towns are barely educated due to a lack of interest and investment taken by the Government.It should consider giving scholarships to students who

comes

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from

the

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poor families.

In addition

by

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spending money on skill centres for children might have a chance to crack a job. In conclusion, the promotion of

art

is good but improving the standards of health and

education

in the country by funding at the proper rate is crucial.