You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practice in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: • describe what the group does • explain why the group is good for the community • suggest alternative days and times for practice
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Dear sir/madam,
My name is Gobinda Mudvhari one of the parts of musicians who practice Tuesday and Friday evenings We listened to your notice about the community hall will be busy Tuesday and Friday evenings from
next
week.
As you know we belong to the same community where is the community hall.We are practising musical instruments there for six months.We are planning to teach new children next
month at the same place.
We all are able to play musical instruments very well with your support.We also
win many trophies through musical competitions.As you know many new children also
want to learn music that's why participants are increasing day by day in our group.Many young generation boys and girls who lose their family control few of them are started to use drugs also
.When we start this
group then
all of the young generations use their free time to learn music.
I am asking you humbly request to If are you unable to provide this
place same time we can go to change our schedule day and time.Please accept our request and try to manage another schedule for us.
your's faithfully,
Gobinda MUdvhariSubmitted by bhattaraikeshav2014 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite