Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem. Others believe that human beings are more important. Give your own opinion.

Of those issues that have concerned the environment, the extinction of

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has become a prominent one. In

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usually leads to the question of whether

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should protect

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or not.

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some

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support the fact that protecting

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is more important, I belong to those

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who oppose

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phenomenon because

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are part of our ecological chain and a source of food for

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. Those who hold

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attitude towards

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believe that

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method may exert a signification effect on

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and environmental degradation. To be more specific, the conservation of

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which is considered to be the best way to save the habitat of

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always top of the list of their argument.

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point can be demonstrated with the case of

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which frequent dig up the soil to provide nutrients and are on the verge of extinction because of the annihilation of man In order to solve the aforementioned serious problem in short term, I believe that the most effective solution would be for the government to introduce strict laws. Particularly, they should apply serious punishments for everyone who violates the law, especially illegal animal hunters. If

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measure is applied widely, the number of wild animal deal with endangered will almost certainly reduce.

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, a recent study by Cambridge University found that the highest penalty for hunters is from 6 months to 3 years of imprisonment. All things considered, perhaps no subject in the world is likely to cause so much controversy as tackle

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issue. As for as, I am concerned negative sides of

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trend eventually outweigh

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