Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others,however,believe that boys and girls benefit more attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a common belief that forcing
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students
studies
studeres
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students
in
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different
gender
to learn
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at
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ar
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two
seperative
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separative
separate
school
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is a good choice.
However
, there is a more persuasive opinion that both boy
students
and girl
students
could be benefited from a common kind of school, as now will be discussed.
To begin
with,
students
studying in a
distingctively
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distinctively
distinctive
gender
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institution
instituition
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institution
could avoid sexual
relationship
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.
Indeen
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Indeed
, boys and girls in the sensitive period of secondary level with
chaging
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changing
in the physiological conditions would have sex, which if girls had pregnant, it could have
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damaged their's healthy and prolonged the time for
competitie
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competitive
secondary degree. In
Viotham
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Vietnam
,
for example
, a statistic carried out by the census
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agency
agancy
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agency
shows that
approximatetly
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approximately
23% of
students
between 12 to15 years old! have sex and 10% of these
students
have to stop temporarily the study.
Nevertheless
, If
students
are not divided into
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gender
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of gender
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institution
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, it can bring many
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beneficial
benifical
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beneficial
effects. One of the major effects related to the trend of a
mix
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school is that
students
might feel
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ease
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easy
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to
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communicate
comunicate
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communicate
with
the
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person who has
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opposite
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opposive
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opposite
gender
.
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phenomenal will lead to the greatest
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communication
comunication
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communication
skill
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among
amonge
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among
students
and
contributed
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the
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speed of economical development of a specific nation.
In addition
,
the
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gender
discrimination could not appear in
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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