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The number of people who decide not to have children has increased greatly Do you think this is a positive or negative development

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More and more couples have decided not to have
children
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 in our modern world. Some people think that it could cause some adverse impacts on society, but there are more convincing reasons that it can be seen as
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positive growth in our community. On the one hand,
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declining fertility has brought a negative effect on the workforce. The decreasing number of
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 eventually causes the labour shortage because the job market needs young people to continually take over the position the older generation left. The fewer
children
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 are born, the fewer available working staff will work in the future.
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, many Western countries where lots of couples decided not to have
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, have suffered from the deficiency of qualified clerks and have to rent workers from other developing countries to foster the economy.
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 society with a low fertility rate can offer
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 education for youngsters. In terms of family, parents can spend more time taking care of their
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 of working overtime to ensure making enough money to raise their
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.
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, many married couples may have more time to educate their child well by helping their child to do schoolwork.
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, in terms of
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 level, with fewer
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, better childcare will be provided
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 the same resources, which helps more
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 to have a great environment to develop. Because the funds available to a community are limited, the fewer
children
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 are raised, the better services can be offered within the same amount of money. Take an example of a school with 100
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, they can provide a better quality of education and state-of-the-art facilities from the same budget
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 those that have 1000
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. In conclusion, it is undeniable that having fewer
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 can
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 on the workplace, but it is more obvious that
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 trend has more advantages
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 our society, including better education for youngsters. The number of people who decide not to have
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 has increased greatly Do you think
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 is a positive or negative development
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographic trends
  • Family planning
  • Societal norms
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Economic implications
  • Work-life balance
  • Overpopulation
  • Cultural perceptions
  • Personal autonomy
  • Life satisfaction
  • Elderly care
  • Labor force
  • Population dynamics
  • Child-free lifestyle
  • Resource allocation
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