Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. Do you agree or disagree ?

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Every day, In the world, is occurring many
crimes
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, society argues that the main problem is poverty while others do not agree with
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statement. In my opinion, I agree that poverty is the reason behind most
crimes
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, and I will discuss, in
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essay, two main reasons to support my opinion.
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, it is worth mentioning that most persons will commit a crime because they have unsatisfied needs. So, poor
people
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are more likely to have need
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not satisfied while rich
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can easily fulfil their needs through money.
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, a beggar is really hungry and, if he doesn’t eat in the
next
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few days is about to pass away, in
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situation the probability that the beggar will commit a crime
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as robbing increases sharply.
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, rich individuals can easily fulfil needs like that mentioned above apart from special cases.
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, poor individuals have few things to lose so they can commit
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without a lot of thought. Wheatly
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compared to poor
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have many things that they need to protect
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as property, money in the bank account and so on.
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, a poor person
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going to commit a felony
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as stealing from the bank, if he will be caught he will lose almost anything while a rich person will lose all his property and money. In conclusion,
people
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may vary in their opinion; I think, a shortage of resources is a primary reason for criminal behaviour since it creates an unsatisfied need and ,in
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pushes individuals to commit
crimes
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.
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