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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others,however,believe that boys and girls benefit more attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #boys #girls #schools #benefit
In developed countries, there are many main fields to improve the country
such
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 healthy fields, economic
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… but the most important is education fields. Some people think that it is better to educate different genders in one-sex
schools
, but the
other
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 believe that
boys
 and
girls
 benefit more from attending mixed
schools
. In my opinion, I think it will be better for genders attending mixed
schools
. In one-sex
schools
, there are some advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly
, when
boys
 and
girls
 attend
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separate
schools
, they can enjoy their atmosphere and communicate
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same
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gender
.
Secondly
,
boys
 and
girls
 have
a different behaviours
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,
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while
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whill
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while
girls
 are tender, some
boys
 are very nasty and rude, in some
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, separate
schools
 are
good
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 choice for parents.
However
,
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 the other side, studying in separate
schools
 makes children cannot contact
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the
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other children
in
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 different
gender
.
Also
, it can make cause
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anxiety disorder when they contact with
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gender
. In the
same
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gender
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school,
boys
 and
girls
 can play, table and study together. Because of their different
gender
, they have a lot of information to talk about.
Also
, it can increase
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solidarity
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 each people and there is no
gender
 discrimination in mixed-school.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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