Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others,however,believe that boys and girls benefit more attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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… but the most important is education fields. Some people think that it is better to educate different genders in one-sex

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, but the

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believe that

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and

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benefit more from attending mixed

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. In my opinion, I think it will be better for genders attending mixed

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. In one-sex

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, there are some advantages and disadvantages.

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attend

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separate

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, they can enjoy their atmosphere and communicate

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.

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,

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are tender, some

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are very nasty and rude, in some

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, separate

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choice for parents.

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the other side, studying in separate

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makes children cannot contact

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other children

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different

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, it can make cause

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anxiety disorder when they contact with

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same-gender

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school,

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can play, table and study together. Because of their different

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, they have a lot of information to talk about.

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, it can increase

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solidarity

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each people and there is no

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discrimination in mixed-school.