Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether
students
should focus on further
education
in universities and colleges or it
is better to let them apply for a Correct word choice
whether it
job
straight after school. In this
essay
I am going to present both views and give my opinion. Some people tend to think that it is better to continue your Add a comma
essay,
education
in higher institutions, because of the higher employment opportunities. One of the first things we need to take into consideration is that universities and colleges give you more understanding and knowledge in the sphere you are studying in
, Change preposition
apply
that
helps you become a better specialist and most Correct pronoun usage
which
of
Change preposition
apply
the
employers search for Correct article usage
apply
well trained
workers. Add a hyphen
well-trained
For example
, nurses and dentists are required to have special training, which can take for
about ten years, without it they won’t even be able to become a simple doctor. But not only Change preposition
apply
students
of medical specialisations take further
education
, designers, managers, writers and others do it too, that’s because often students
don’t have enough knowledge to start their career, but with the help of professors, they have a lot more chances to become professionals and it will be easier for them to get a job
. However
, others insist that it’s better to get a job
,
because you can earn money and not spend it on expensive learning. Remove the comma
apply
For instance
, university prices go higher every year which
is not affordable for every family to let their children apply for one, so as we can see from the Correct pronoun usage
it
last
trends, it becomes more common for students
to start their own business
, build Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
career
as a photographer, freelancer or etc. and make good money out of it. Fix the agreement mistake
careers
To conclude
, I consider learning at high
Correct word choice
higher
education
institutions is
a good base for futureWrong verb form
to be
career
and Fix the agreement mistake
careers
improvement
Correct article usage
the improvement
students
will get is indispensable, but in my opinion
it is not a necessity and it would be nicer to put less pressure on those, who have chosen not to take Add a comma
opinion,
this
path and got a job
straight after school.Submitted by oimigle on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion