Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is commonly argued that physical

strength

is

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instrumental factor

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success in

sport

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. While some people think that mental

strength

plays the role in winning, I would lean on the formal delve into both opinions. Those advocates of mental

strength

as the most integral part of success would argue that having a tough mind could assist athletes in strenuous training sessions. Before becoming an actual athlete, a trainee usually undergoes some rigorous tasks. If they had

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strong mental health, it could evoke their

passions

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for sports and improve their patience to cope with those tasks without wanting to quit.

In addition

, when the match is in

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rise, the player will need to focus intensely and not be distracted by crowds, which can only be achieved with mental

strength

. If

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instead

, the athlete had a weak mind, they could switch off and lose the game.

However

, I would completely agree with the fact that physical

strength

is vital to

succeed

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in a sport. It is the basis

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almost every sport. While some people do exercise to improve their metabolism or keep in shape, professional athletes are required to be physically strong in order to win a match. Contacting sports

such

as wrestling, football or even weight-lifting involve a plethora of

strength

. If the participants are not strong enough, they are likely to enhance chemical substances to increase their

strength

.

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is particularly the case for doping, which is an illegal substance and is considered

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a cheating method,

although

it is banned from

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or sea

game

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, some competitors still yield it secretly for more

strength

. In conclusion, while mental health could improve

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concentration and be a motivation, physically is the driving factor to success. Personally, I suppose that there would be a higher chance of winning if competitors have both mental and physical

strength

.