While choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?
Compensation for a job plays an essential role in satisfying all the necessities. Some think that wages should be a priority when selecting a post. I
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believe
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such
as performance satisfaction, finding friendly colleagues Linking Words
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the environment a firm is surrounded by really matters. Correct word choice
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statement and elaborates on reasons to come to a logical conclusion.
First of all, business satisfaction plays an important role in most people's lives when selecting a company for an opportunity. Linking Words
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, if the man is not interested in a specific operation and has been doing the activity, he will not be able to accomplish it as effectively as if he Linking Words
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Furthermore
, working with good colleagues is as vital as work satisfaction as one person is not able to handle the workload all by himself and has to approach his colleagues at some point. Linking Words
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, working together will not only make the task enjoyable, which means less boring but Linking Words
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, the environment one is going to be surrounded by does matter as a pollution-free atmosphere is enticing to experience Linking Words
while
working around and having lunch together under a big tree with its shadow protecting one from the scorching heat. Linking Words
Besides
, the purity level of air will be excellent when working near a greenery area, which means retaining better health than others, who work in a highly-polluted city, Linking Words
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, in the case of earnings, it is as important as other elements because almost all people Linking Words
are rather
studying to attain a post in a well-reputed company because of the salary amount than forming new relationships. Verb problem
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this
fact will not allow a person to pursue the same profession for a long duration.
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both points have their own place, other factors Linking Words
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the stipend. So, in my opinion, it is better to think about mental stress, place, and reputation rather than just concentrating on the wageVerb problem
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