Some people believe it is a good idea for students to work part-time to ensure better opportunities in the future. Others are of the opinion, job during study distracts the individual. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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better chance of achievement in the

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distracts their minds.

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side and give suggestions as well.

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used to

work

hard and never

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relief

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any body shoulder.

in other words

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which he definitely face in

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future

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part

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make

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strong

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enough.

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people

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that you have to be used

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inflation.

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people

thinks

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that doing jobs while doing

study

can

also

help them out

to

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money for their extra expense

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as outing with friends and going

road

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trips as well.

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isn't that

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financial strong in their life so he's doing

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and taking all

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out

from

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it.

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some

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while

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can't be tolerated because

disturb

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all the

study

.

kid

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have to give more focus on their

study

because it was

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age

and

it

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age

of learning

thing

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. because they'll completely

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can get

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easily. to illustrate, one of my close

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part

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time

but his

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to distract because he was unable to give to

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furthermore

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also

believe that during

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time

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are so harmful

for

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their

future's

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.many of kid leave their

study

because of

work load

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and getting high salaries .

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pakistan

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most of the

people

students

doesn't complete their education because of

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their shoulder. to sum up,

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majority of

people

that

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important for

students

to

work

from

teenagers

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life.other believe that any type of

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will definitely distract their

mind set

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from

the

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study's

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. in my opinion, it

crucial

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for

students

to

work

from

their

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early

age

so they used it and

also

make extra money for their

expense

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.