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you have got a warning letter from a company you working write why it happned how it happened why do you think it is unfair

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
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 letter in response to the warning letter from the organisation.On October 12 in the afternoon, I received a call from the Area administrator Ali for covering the
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guard
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 for 2 hours as he will be running late because of a flat tire. I stayed there by responding to all my duties by logging the packages and responding to the inquiries of residents of the building around 4:25pm supervisor was passing by the concierge saying that he will send a patrol
guard
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 to relieve me once he arrive. The patrol
guard
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 came to the
desk
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 at 4:35 pm and took over the duties of the
desk
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 writer responded him back saying that it fine as he knew pranay is running late he is okay at
desk
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 to stay 2 hours more as he aggred.
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, parol
guard
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 relieved the security on
desk
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 by taking over responsibility
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 writer had no information weather the area supervisor katya and site supervisor mohammed have communicated with each other and on duty security left the site at 4:40 pm. please accept my apologies if i was not able to respond to my duties at work whereas, it is
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 essential to see my side of story. yours faithfully abc

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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