In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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decision. In conclusion, it can hardly be denied, that decreased hungry rate and

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Buying things on the internet, such as books air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantage of shopping in this way weight the disadvantage