In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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agriculture

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the agriculture

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sector in

majority

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countries

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in the world achieved significant

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results

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people still go hungry. There are many reasons why it

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. There are a lot of necessary and timely solutions to

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of the important and actual

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problem

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. According to the statistics number of people

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every year

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encreased

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dramatically and today

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approximately more

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billion. Of course,

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volnurable

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situation demand

from

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apply

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governments and International organization to make

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quickly

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quicly

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quick

and right decision.

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problem

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could not

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one

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country and

demand

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holistic

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approach.

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as drought and floods and

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is any kind of local war in the world. These conditions decreased to supply

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goods on time. In my opinion, today many governments together with United Nations Organization try and do some necessary measures in order to

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problem

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. Unfortunately, the results are not effective. It seems to me, key

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to find

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balance between

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and help. The

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way to improve

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is to solve

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corridor. In the other words, to provide safe

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, today many export agriculture countries could not supply

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they

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goods destination because

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place

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in the world

continuous

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local war and piracy. Eventually, I think the best way to solve

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actual and

exict

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exact

exist

problem

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is to

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continue a negotiation process between all participants and try to find

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the multilateral

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decision. In conclusion, it can hardly be denied, that decreased hungry rate and

solved

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this

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problem

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demand

holistic

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a holistic

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approach.

Allazhar

Oct 15, 2022

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inequality
distribution
access to resources
climate change
natural disasters
political factors
economic factors
agricultural practices
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population growth
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