The municipal corporation in the area where you live has decided to demolish a historical building to build a shopping center. Write a letter to the mayor of the corporation. In your letter: You have to explain why it is important to preserve the building suggest how the building can be used to benefit the local community.

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Payal and I am President of the Gupta colony for the past 5 years now. I am writing
this
letter to highlight the significance of Red Fort in our community.
Instead
of destroying it from scratch, we can hire experienced architects to reform the fort in a mall.
As a result
, there will be more visitors visiting
this
place which will not only help localities to boost their sales but
also
authorities can be benefited immensely by collecting tax amounts from them. More importantly, it will solve the purpose of reforming it for people's convenience as well as its historical significance can be preserved for future generations. I have discussed
this
idea with the other members of our society and they are
also
in
this
favour. I hope my suggestion will be helpful. Anticipating a favourable response Yours faithfully, Payal Gupta
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
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  • therefore
  • however
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  • despite

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