Write a letter of complaint to a company outlining a problem you had while visiting one of their stores.In your letter include. What the

Dear Sir/Madam, I hope you are doing well and keeping safe. I need to draw your attention towards an issue I had while I visited your

store

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last

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. I request you

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apply

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allow me to elaborate. It was

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Sunday, dated 9th October 2022, when I visited your

store

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in Rohini. As it was the weekend, I expected it to be busy but what disappointed me was the mismanagement at your

store

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. I really felt that the

store

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was understaffed considering Diwali is just in a few days and the implications of it

was

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were

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noticed by many customers who waited in long queues for hours. There were limited sales agents on the floor who could entertain

customer’s

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customers’

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queries and I observed

few

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a few

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of them leaving the

store

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in frustration. As your

store

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has a noticeable reputation in the market, I wanted to point out

this

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problem so that it benefits us all in every manner. To entertain your customers properly, I suggest you plan at least a week before so that we can avoid

such

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situations.

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, you can have a separate area for

customer’s

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customers’

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queries so that it does not jam the floor area for those who do not want any help. I hope you will take my suggestion into consideration and we will have better service in future. Thanking you, Karan

mailtoritika.chandwani

Oct 15, 2022

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

223 words

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