You have a full time job and also doing part time evening course, You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. -Describe the situation. -Explain why you can not continue at this time. -Say what action you would like to take.

#time #job #part #course #tutor #-describe #situation #-explain #-say #action

Dear sir, I am writing a letter to inform you that I have a problem with my current condition now.

Thus

, I have a hard

time

fixing my schedule to continue the program at your establishment. My schedule is not helping me at all. I am working at the hospital wherein I have different schedules and most of the

time

my Head Nurse is assigning me in the daytime or at night

time

. For

this

reason, I cannot manage to attend my course and

also

I am losing my concentration on my studies. In relation to

this

, I suggest that I can provide you with a copy of my working hours

then

try to fit me into your available schedule and match it with my free

time

. If it is not possible, May I request your good office to refund my membership and try to enrol in the

semester? I am hoping that you will consider my above situation. Yours sincerely, xxx

Submitted by joannaagcanas2 on Sat Oct 15 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

163 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
These days, many people argue that they should be allowed to keep all their money and do not need to pay taxes to the government. Personally, I completely disagree with this statement because there are many disadvantages of keeping all the money and people can deny paying tax will have many benefits.
7
band
Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermakets in some countries, many small and local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, many countries have enforced the growth of supermarkets to provide their people with an easy way out to buy groceries in just one single place. Nevertheless, this form of expansion often pushes back the development of small businesses because there is no gap for the locals to compete with the bigger ones. Although there are many different opinions have been said about this matter, I agree that the downfall of local businesses can negatively affect the lives of local societies around them.
5.5
band
Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is undebatable that there are numerous problems in our environment. While some argue that declining in the number of species (flora and fauna) is the premiere problem, others say the main problem is more than that. In this essay, I will examine both views and give some reasons why I firmly believe that the pivotal issues are more than the loss of certain species.
7
band
Children are now less active in their free time that in the past. Therefore, sports lesson must be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, teenagers are becoming lazier and do less exercise than people many decades ago. Therefore, there is a need to add more mandatory sports lessons in schools for students. In this essay, I will present reasons for not being persuaded by this statement.
7
band
You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: • introduce yourself • explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have
I hope this letter finds you well. My name is Antoine and I am writing to express my interest in pursuing new career opportunities in the field of marketing.

You have a full time job and also doing part time evening course, You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. -Describe the situation. -Explain why you can not continue at this time. -Say what action you would like to take.

People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermakets in some countries, many small and local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Children are now less active in their free time that in the past. Therefore, sports lesson must be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: • introduce yourself • explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have