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Research shows that some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people engage in unhealthy activities. What is the cause of this? What can be done?

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It is observed that some
activities
 are beneficial for health, whereas
others
 have detrimental effects on the health of
people
.
However
, many knowingly continue to indulge in
activities
 that would affect body health harmfully. Exist There are several reasons why
people
 tend to do that
such
 as forcing
others
for
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to
joining
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 to a
group
 and being addicted. Intensified
media
 exposure to a healthy
lifestyle
 and accessible medical consultation to the public might be the solutions
of
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this
 issue. Social connections could play a major role in holding
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unhealthy holding
 unhealthy
lifestyle
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when
people
 imitate
others
 to be blended in a
group
. Taking part in gathering and having a sense of belonging might release a short-time satisfying satisfaction and
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. To cite an example, teenagers accept smoking as a
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joining a
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to
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a higher social
group
 as well as having the same status .
Additionally
, addiction is the key factor of
unhealthy
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lifestyle
.
People
 who are addicted desire
cigarette
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cigarettes
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 or alcohol despite the
time-period
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 and negative influences.
This
 tendency to indulge in deleterious actions can be eradicated through the
media
 and free consultations
of
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 medical workers. Nowadays
media
outlines
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 tools are reachable and
people
 are using them to publish the outcomes of damaging
activities
.
Medias
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Media
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 can prevent the spread of not only obesity and lung cancer,
whichthat
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which that
 has a high social
importancemeaning
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importance meaning
, but
also
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that
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 would be
first
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sign of early cognitive disorder.
Secondly
, accessible medical consultations to the public could assist society/
people
 in preventing
from
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unhealthy
activities
.
People
 who tend to have addictions are able to get receive
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advice
advices
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 from highly qualified practitioners without any charge. In conclusion, a large number of citizens participate
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and engage
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in
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in
 unhealthy
activities
 disregarding expert warnings is ubiquitous. When, imitations of
others
 to join a
group
 and addictions might be causes of holding unhealthy
lifestyle
 despite
of
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expert warnings, there
areexist
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are exist
 solutions
such
 as free medical consultation and
media
 campaigns that should be implemented.
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