Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisements. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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all types of advertising would bring

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the community. Owing to the fact that individuals’ opinion concerning the statement is divided, in

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essay, I will carefully examine different approaches to reach a reasonable conclusion. On the one hand, there is a numerous

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people that would not mind being isolated from various sorts of promotion activities, as from their point of view, advantages

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case prevail over disadvantages. Indeed,

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itself is a useful tool of commercial and non-commercial facilities to not only promote

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of products and services

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to convey their ideas and perception of random facts. To the best of my knowledge, promotions are occasionally seen as

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quite compelling propaganda, that has been successfully inclining a certain group of society, depending on

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context, to believe in whatever these organizations plan for centuries. Unfortunately, a solid bunch of stories and issues shall serve as an example of human beings becoming victims of

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persuasive advertisements, which have led them to enormous

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and other unpleasurable consequences.

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, advertising is commonly accepted as a channel of data exchange between an ordinary society representative and companies or authorities,

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a great many of those whose attention has never been deliberately drawn to

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it has not been considered as a thread. To be honest, there is no denying that advertisement, under the capacity of a relatively traditional marketing instrument, is being commonly used for new and fresh knowledge acquisition. Taking into consideration everything mentioned above, personally, I support the idea of self-conscious information consumption, since “business sharks” in any sphere of our life definitely would not find it impossible to impact upon a mature mind of a person, who has strong self-awareness and clear vision of his or her wants and needs.