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Children are generally more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Thus, it is better to learn languages in childhood. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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According to new studies,
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 believe if someone wants to learn a new
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 it is better to do it when you are young because it is easier than when they grow up. I absolutely agree with
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 statement and
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 essay will discuss some reasons for it.
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 with, humans at a younger age have fewer things to do and they are not as busy as their parents because they do not have a job.
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,
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 will help them to spend more
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 studying and working on a new
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 or whatever they want.
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, when I was a child, I would go to
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 from 8 in the morning to 2, after that I had a whole
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 to study English because in elementary
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 you do not have to do a lot of homework.
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, older
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 do not have much free
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 like their children.
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, most of the kids are learning a new
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 from
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 which is part of their mandatory education plan.
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 means, the
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 will force students to do their homework and
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 will help to learn to go faster.
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, in Canada, pupils have to learn French in some schools, and
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, they have to take tests and exams for that subject, which means, those kids have to learn and do well in that.
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, forcing and reminding from
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 is really important to help learn a new
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. To conclude, I believe
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 in their childhood can improve their
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 skills by learning foreign languages because they have more
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 to study
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 of older
people
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 and having a new
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 course in
school
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 can really help them.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive development
  • neuroplasticity
  • critical period
  • language acquisition
  • linguistic proficiency
  • phonetic articulation
  • bilingualism
  • multilingual
  • immersion
  • pedagogy
  • pronunciation
  • sociolinguistics
  • accent reduction
  • retention
  • cultural assimilation
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